Chanson écrite il y a environ trois ans, elle me plait encore aujourd'hui. Inspirée par Tristania et Sirenia (Morten Veland de manière plus générale). Il est évident que jamais je n'atteindrait le niveau de Morten quand il s'agit d'écrire des paroles, mais il est l'une de mes principales sources d'inspiration.
Gras: Refrain, voix féminine ou voix masculine claire (moins bon pour la mise en scène de la chanson).
Crochets/italique: Murmures, voix féminine ou masculine claire (moins bon pour la mise en scène de la chanson).
Normal: Voix masculine sombre grave (idéalement), avec variations dans l'aigu, couplets.
Rien que là, on sent déjà l'inspration "Tristaniesque"...
Oh be mine
After this life we will never be together
Again
Oh be mine
Beyond the dark abyss of those truth untold
Be mine
Oh be mine!
Remember this time we were innocent
Oh be mine!
Remember a time without our sorrow
I’ve always tried to capture this picture
Feelings in the air like an ancient power
Between you and me
[The link]
Bound to your sanity
I could never escape
Prisoner of thoughts
[You were mine]
Enchained to the fiend you were
A siren killing the fairytale
Still brought to the cliffs
And pushed by the wind
[Unfair]
Cursed to death
Oh be mine
After this life we will never be together
Again
Oh be mine
Beyond the dark abyss of those truth untold
Be mine
Catch me as I fall
Hope has gone again
I knew you’d forsake me
Now I feel the wind on my face
Catch me as I fall
Hope has gone again
I knew you’d forsake me
Now I feel the wind on my face
Is it the cliff I am falling from
Or is the pit of oblivion
[All alone now]
unforgiving truth
Why do you awake me
By the tears of life
Now it is a depth of grief
Memories of the days we were living together
[Invoke my name again]
Memories of the pain the day you left me
[Sirens are evil in the see]
Be mine!
Oh be mine
After this life we will never be together
Again
Oh be mine
Beyond the dark abyss of those truth untold
Be mine
Undead
Cursed to wander in silence
Under a bleak moon laughing at my face
[Undead]
Undead
I will meet you again
Betrayed
My blood has been poured on a sacred ground
[meet me again]
[Revive our happiest moments]
[Together]
Betrayed
Cursed to wander forever
On the haunted shores of a mythic Styx
Anathema from the annihilation of my innocent soul
Undead
[Undead]
Wanderer in the night
Betrayed
Oh be mine
After this life we will never be together
Again
Oh be mine
Beyond the dark abyss of those truth untold
Come back to me
Siren song will end
I am not a believer anymore
[be mine]
Voila... Difficile de se faire une idée du "produit fini", mais on peut toujours essayer. En ce qui me concerne je sais exactement quel rythme je souhaiterai là-dessus, quels instruments, mais... Je pense que tout le monde la lira différemment.